Monday 11 June 2018

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My name is Lucas and I go to Ormond School. I  am half Māori and half european. I am good at reading and I enjoy spelling. I am looking forward to camp this year. I am inspired by my mum and dad because there never give up.

8 comments:

  1. Kia ora Lucas
    I have enjoyed reading your blog it has so much information
    Keep up the good work

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    1. thank you kohe for your fed bak kep it caming thank you agen by lucas

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  2. Kai ora Lucas
    I really like who you expies you
    I think you shuold make your wirting
    more intreasting

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  3. KIA ORA Lucas my name is Amelia from Te Hapara school.
    i really liked that your mum and dad inspires you to never give up.
    last year i really looked forward to camp too.
    i was wondering what year you are.

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  4. Kia ora, I am Thomas from Te Hapara School.
    I really liked how you used detail in your writing.
    I learnt that you are from different countries and that you enjoy spelling.
    Maybe you could do a little bit more writing in your paragraph .
    Have you been in New Zealand for a long time?
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href="https://”http://thsthomasd.blogspot.com/”>here</a>
    Mā te wā
    Thomas

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    1. thank you for your comment Thomas maybe you cold Mack a hyperlink to your blog I will help you if you are Ann chor

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  5. Kia ora, I am Quentin from Riverdale School.
    I really liked what you added to your profile
    I learnt that you thinking to go on your camp of the year
    Maybe you could make your Writing a bit more interesting
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog insert your blog URL Here

    Mā te wā
    Quentin

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  6. hi i don't what me write

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